Katy Bailey:
"It's good, the wind blowing over the titles introduces the genre early and you have used good shots. The music is spooky and childish to fit the narrative and it's good to go black at the end. I think it need to have a build up of shots or music or something afterwards to add the suspense that occurs in a horror trailer."
"It's a good start, with good acting and good switching of scenes. However, more of the actual story line should be involved for the viewer to develop a better understanding of the film."
Harrison Payne:
"I enjoy the use of music and believe it fits to the genre of film perfectly. I think that the acting is good and the range of camera angles and shots really add to the mysterious atmosphere. However to improve i think you would need to explore further into the story of the film, so that the audience can interact more with what they are watching."
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